can some1 reread this, and write a dew sentec about football todya, ill give10 points for the girst person wh?
Im not good at rereading my paper.
Rugby began in the 19th century in England when a soccer player named William Ebb Ellis was frustrated using his feet to kick the soccer ball. So William had decided to pick up the ball and run with it, even though it was against the rule to do this. Soon other people had started the new way to play soccer. A Few months later a man named Walter Camp had invented the game Rugby in American in 1876. Walter had got the idea from William Ebb Ellis. Soon the sport Rugby became a world wide success that came into America. Rugby was played by colleges like Harvard University and Yale. The two colleges had met in Massachusetts in 1876 to form rules to rugby that were similar to England rule. The differences were the shape and size of the ball, and the name of it, which was now called football. The first intercollegiate level football game was played on November 6, 1869 in New Brunswick New Jersey. The two teams were Rutgers University and Princeton with 25 players on each team. Rutgers players wore a colored turbans wore on their heads to part them as a team from Princeton. Princeton team wore regular white t-shirts and blue denim jeans. The players on the Princeton team weren’t good as Rutgers because they couldn’t kick well as they did. But they were more build up then Rutgers players. The Rutgers team on the other hand were competitively weak to Princeton, but were great in kicking the ball throughout the game, which had led them to win the first game ever, 6 to 4. The team mascot of Rutgers was a Scarlet Knight, which has been changed many times.
Do you speak english? ? ??????????
I think you need to work on ur spelling first!♥
first of all you should be doing your own homework.
second of all your paper needs to flow.
You need to read your paper and learn to spot your grammatical errors yourself. Example : But they were more build up then th Rutgers players. Correction: build should be built and you really need to rephrase the sentence.
Rugby began in the 19th century in England. A soccer player named William Ebb
Ellis was frustrated using his feet to kick the soccer ball; So William had decided
to pick up the ball and run with it, even though it was against the rule to do this.
Soon other people had started the new way to play soccer. A Few months later a man
named Walter Camp had invented the game Rugby in American in 1876. Walter had got
the idea from William Ebb Ellis. Soon the sport Rugby became a world wide success
that came into America. Rugby was played by colleges like Harvard University and
Yale. The two colleges had met in Massachusetts in 1876 to form rules to rugby that
were similar to England rule. The differences were the shape and size of the ball,
and the name of it, which was now called football. The first intercollegiate level
football game was played on November 6, 1869 in New Brunswick New Jersey. The two
teams were Rutgers University and Princeton with 25 players on each team. Rutgers
players wore a colored turbans wore on their heads to part them as a team from Princeton.
Princeton team wore regular white t-shirts and blue denim jeans. The players on the
Princeton team weren’t good as Rutgers because they couldn’t kick well as they did.
But they were more build up then Rutgers players. The Rutgers team on the other hand
were competitively weak to Princeton, but were great in kicking the ball throughout
the game, which had led them to win the first game ever, 6 to 4. The team mascot
of Rutgers was a Scarlet Knight, which has been changed many times.
” Walter had got the idea from William Ebb Ellis.” –drop the ‘had’
“which was now called football”– change ‘was’ into ‘is’
“Rutgers players wore a colored turbans wore on their heads to part them as a team from Princeton.”– drop the second ‘wore’
“The players on the Princeton team weren’t good as Rutgers because they couldn’t kick well as they did”– In essays you should not use contractions so turn ‘weren’t’ into were not and ‘couldnt’ into could not
“more build up”– built
“which had led them to win the first game “– drop the had
yay for everyone answering this before me.
Besides needing to fix your grammar errors, you need some additional relavant ideas. Some of the history was good, but nobody cares what the players were wearing. You also should come up with a conclusion. Good luck – Nobody is going to do this for you.