how to do write an introductory paragraph for a personal essay? 10 points best answer?
by admin on Thursday, September 9th, 2010 | 5 Comments
okay. the details are:
went to volleyball camp
went to wildwood new jersey
went to florida
its a five paragraph essay. how do i start it??
thanks everyone!
and just so you know im a freshman in high school. idk if that matters.
I assume your writing about what you did over the summer.
Just start of with an interesting sentence.
And state your thesis statement (all of those 3 things youve listed camp, new jersey, florida) in order so you can write your body paragraph according to what your thesis statement is
Then end it off with a closing sentence
start wid details of these sports….then rank them according to their world ranking…..and try to put everything interesting……and yeah don’t put facts!!!!!!!!!!!!
Adventure and travel are two things that many people worldwide enjoy. I have gone to volleyball camp and met other people who enjoy my passion for volleyball. My family and I traveled to both Wildwood, New Jersey and to Florida. My experiences are part of what makes me who I am.
Maybe in the introductory paragraph write down there were three places you went to. Say you went to volleyball camp, wildwood New Jersey, and Florida. Then, in the second paragraph, discuss volleyball camp, then 3rd paragraph Wildwood, NJ, and the 4th discuss Florida. Of course, the fifth is the conclusion.
Introduce yourself and what your essay is about. Then move on to telling about what you did. Don’t include too many details.
So, something like this,
Over my summer vacation, I had a lot of good experiences. First, I went to volleyball camp, and I met some very kind people. Then, I took a trip to Wildwood New Jersey. It was a blast! I took a ton of photos!
And finally, I went to Florida. We had a great time doing ________!