I just wrote my ABOUT ME and I was curious if it was any good. I like things I write to be done well?
ByI FIGURED SENSE PEOPLE READ IN THIS SECTION I WOULD FIND GOOD ANSWERS TO MY ABOUT ME AS IN IF I NEED TO CHANGE ANYTHING TO MAKE IT SOUND BETTER AND WHAT NOT
Whats up everyone!!!
I am a 20 year old whose name is James and I live in bum-fock nowhere Wyoming. Other wise known as the least populated state. I did live in Phoenix for 3 to 4 years before, long story told short, my family kicked me out.
Some of my hobbies are partying, hang gliding, jet skiing, snowboarding, snowmobiling, fishing, working on cars, and spend time or camping out at Alcova Lake during the summer
On my freetime when I am not working I chill with my buddies and watch a lot of anime.
Anime is a big part of my life and my future, lol.
Here is my top 5 favorite anime
1.) One Piece
2.) Baccano
3.) Code Geass/R2
4.) Great Teacher Onizuka
5.) Fairy Tale
Put 1&1 and 2&2 together and what do they =
1. Love beautiful nice women
2. Hate lying cheating BITCHES!!!
1. Love my girlfriend Ashley
2. Hate her stupid effin friends
Lastly this is a toast! For those who love us, the b!tches who hate us, and the lucky m0ther-fockers who got to know us
1 Comments
June 14th, 2010 at 11:07 am
I like it, just a few things:
>My name is James and Im 20 years old… (just switch the order round, I think it sounds better)
>I lived in Pheonix for three or four years, but to cut a long story short….
>Spending time camping (that part of your sentence didnt really make sense)
> Full stop after summer and your last paragraph
> In my freetime (not on my freetime)
> Here are (not here is)
Otherwise I really like the content